Fast, honest feedback and promo for indie authors. No fluff—just sharp insight that makes your story stronger.
Fiction only. No nonfiction, no children’s, no erotica, no romance. Payments via Ko-fi.
Short, sharp endorsements you can legally use in your Editorial Reviews section, website, or press kit. Not customer reviews.
Based on your retailer page and/or sample. Includes attribution + disclosure and Author Central steps.
Structured feedback using the BFF framework:
Pricing
Turnaround ~3–5 business days.
Your opening graded for market readiness with reasons.
Includes three “Why/Why not” bullets (Hook • Stakes • Read-On Trigger) + three fast fixes.
Add-ons: +$4.99 two-sentence blurb • +$9.99 80–100 word review.
Motion, text, and mood from your Chapter 1 (≤2,500 words) or your retailer blurb. MP4 delivery. Promos are never negative.
Turnaround: 2–3 business days.
Delivered in 1–2 business days.
Checkout on Ko-fi, then submit your files.
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Questions? Contact us.
Consistent, human-led editorial process with diagnostics and AI-assisted analysis. A human editor reviews and customizes all feedback.
Yes. Attribute to Blunt Force Fiction (BFF) and include the disclosure:
(Paid editorial endorsement.)
Amazon Author Central → Editorial Reviews, your website, press kit, and socials. Do not paste into customer review sections.
Endorsements/Chapter: 1–2 business days. Critiques: 3–5 business days. TikTok: 2–3 business days. One revision for Endorsements; evaluations are single-pass.
Because this is custom work, refunds aren’t available once we start. If we miss a promised window by 48+ hours, we comp a rush on your next order.
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If the form gives you trouble, email files/links with your order number to [email protected].
Services are editorial opinions or promotional materials. No guarantee of sales, representation, publication, or algorithmic performance.
You retain all rights. Materials used only to produce your deliverables. Nothing public without written permission.
Critiques ≤ 80,000 words per order. Buy or Bye ≤ 2,500 words (+10% grace). Overages may be declined or quoted separately. Fiction only.
Endorsements: one revision within 7 days. Evaluations are single-pass. TikTok: one minor timing/text tweak within 3 days.
Windows (1–5 business days) are targets. If BFF misses by 48+ hours, we’ll comp a rush on a future order (sole remedy).
All sales are final once work starts. If you request a refund before work starts, we’ll cancel and refund in full. Unauthorized chargebacks may lead to account denial and revocation of license to use BFF materials.
Total liability is limited to the amount paid for the specific order. No indirect or consequential damages.
By completing checkout and submitting the intake form, you agree to these Terms and the Privacy notice.
What we collect: intake details you provide. Payments run via Ko-fi; we never receive full payment data.
Use: deliver your order, contact you; with opt-in, feature a ≤25-word non-spoiler snippet.
Sharing: never sold; only with providers needed to run BFF (Ko-fi, Google Forms/Sheets).
Retention: order records/deliverables kept for bookkeeping and requested follow-ups.
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